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Emily Week 25 100 WC

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My Brother’s Bad Friend

Last Friday my brother’s friend Tim came over. Chloe and I hate Tim, he is annoying.

Mum says give him a chance so we do, but Tim doesn’t at all. He  tangles our jewelry and rips our painting. Mat, our brother, does not even care about his sisters. Mat and Tim hurt us all the time when Mum or Dad are not watching them. 

Bang! Tim snatched the metal bat from the ground. He was smacking us with the bat but then mum came outside. Tim looked shocked and said,“I didn’t mean to hit it that hard”. Mum yelled angrily, “go home Tim now. And Mat to your room.” 

After, mum calmed down. She looked at us, on our arms and legs it looked like squashed strawberries. Mum called the police and they went and spoke to Tim. We never saw Tim again.

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